I liked the original fic and I think I will like this 
verion but it is very slow moving and skips an awful lot. I 
mean obviouslyt things have happened during the year but we 
don't get to seee any of them. at the same time I thouhgt 
much of this was filler that several paragraphs could have 
been made into one shorter paragraph and speed up the plot 
a lot. Still I like the story over all.

Rick

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