This is the best horror story i have read for a while. 
Easily up there with Poison, Real nightmare material. I 
could really feel the pain in this story. I haven't read 
many stories that can make feel this strongly and this 
clearly. I hoope the author will continue this and 
hopefully bring it to a climax. 
 Nodolka is a very believable character here, which is 
rare. I would like to see more of her thoughts in the next 
episode.
 Ranma's anger is believable, although I wil;l say in the 
main universe, I would have a hard time accepting him 
getting that angry that fast with her. This however is 
covered in the opening section, where the author explains 
that he has worried about this for years instead of a few  
wweks or a couple of months at most.
 I liked the touch of Ryoga's feelings. I will say in MY 
opinion,  he would be likely to flip out and get really 
angry at Nodolka once he finds out the details. Maybe even 
madder than Akane. I know love and hate can interchangeable 
under some  extreme circumstances and these are pretty 
extreme.
 All in all a very good story. One I'll remember for a 
while.

Richard Robinson

rik@cfanet.com