Working through some of my backlog...

This is by David Johnston <rgorman@telusplanet.net>.

Looks like a fun story so far. The interplay between the two brothers is
very amusing, and makes this a cut above the usual "New character" fic.
The premise of the story seemed very believeable, as did the reactions
of the newcomers to what they saw in Nerima. Please continue!

There were a few typos and punctuation errors. I can point 'em out later
if you want.


Gary Kleppe
kleppe@execpc.com, Home page http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe
My fanfics and the FFML map are on my comics/manga page,
       http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics