It's beyond my comprehension.  I think I read one of his work, and it
took me about 2 hour by scanning.  I finish Bitter End in less than an
hour by scanning.  That's how long it was.  I think Caller's Plight is
supposed to have FF3 or FF2 elements, does it not?  But I didn't find it
at all.  There are just so many characters!

I never read it.  I was afraid my head was going to explode. ;)

I guess being affected by this Rage Disorder does funny thing to
people...

Yeah, it turns them into psychos with sharp katanas.  (heh)

	Bad Zen.  When Caroline (I'm pretty sure I did to, though I don't see
it in the notes) asked you to write a Ranma & Akane story, it's assumed
that it is going to be a happy one!

I agree with Zen here:  Ranma and Akane definitely do *not* make a good
pair at *all*.  Ranma and Shampoo make a nice pair.  Ranma and Ukyou make a
nice pair.  (No comment on Ranma and Kodachi.)  But Ranma and Akane aren't
compatible at all.  Heck, they've only been living together for a year, and
they've been at each other's throats the whole time.

(Ranma-chan and Ryoga also make a good pair, but I won't get into that just
now... ;)

	The trademarks of a Zen fic is that Ukyou is VERY nice.  Surely you
realize that by now?

Of course.  I'm not a *complete* bonehead. ;)

	Yeah, did you ever get around finishing that, Zen?  Granted, Chapter 1
is like a fanfic itself, so I guess we shouldn't assume immediate

Still, I'm dying to read what happens next.  I'm really hoping this fanfic
doesn't turn out like a 'Benares' fanfic - i.e. doesn't get finished.

progress.  After about two years I still haven't got pass chapter 6 on
the Wanderer of Time.  

	Besides the fact that I don't see how Akane can react so strongly
toward another fiancee, even if it is mechs, (you think she'd just laugh
it off after seeing so many things that are as or weirder than that!),
and a minor nitpick about where Ukyou gets all the money from the
Ucchan's if Konatsu already bankrupted her shop, it's a nicely done
story.  A bit harsh on Akane, but it's good nevertheless.

Bah, Akane deserved it.  She had it coming - there's too many fanfics where
she gets Ranma.  Ukyou needs the spotlight for once, and I'm glad someone
as talented as Zen gave it to her.

Hunter Kid, obviously not a big fan of Akane.
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