This is a pretty good beginning to a story.  I dont know where you are
going with the story but i would personally like to know the history of
the fued and how all the people Ranma mentioned as having passed away.

You had a few spelling errors, but nothing major.  I can't tell from
here but you may be posting in HTML format.  which not everyone is
capable of reading.  You may want to change that, depends one what kind
of email program you are using.

Its a little short to make to much C&C, just that the implied history of
the fued and its consequences sound very interesting.  Please continue.

--Eric
-- 
"I always hated stories that ended poorly. I
always felt cheated.  But you can't feel cheated
forever.  And then she woke up...
I suppose there are worse endings."
--Rose Walker, Lost Hearts