On Mon, 29 Sep 1997, RPM - acct 3/5 wrote:

well, it's been a while, but I finally got back in the
saddle again for this part.  It's still quite raw, so
feel free to correct me on characterization, 
aesthetics, plot, NOT SPELLING (that's what spellcheckers

Nyaah!  You can't stop me! :P

RANMA: (begins to head downstairs, but pauses, then looks at the
       camera)  Look, I ain't kidding.  She'll be fine.  Really.  The
       worst thing that could happen is that her friend will wreck the
       house. (smiles and laughs to himself)  You know, if that happens,
       this place'll feel almost like home. 

Heh.

CAMERA:  Urd, Washu, Ranma, & Kyosuke are seated at the table, eating
         breakfast.  At the moment, breakfast is a surprisingly large
         boiled egg with a side of bacon and toast. 

One single egg for all of them?
 

Ataru's voice:  I've had bad experiences with alien cooking.  Hey, I'm
                not going to turn into a wombat after eating this, am
                I?  

Washu's voice:  Don't be ridiculous. 

Aww!  I wanna see Ataru as a Wombat!
 

   "Hey, let's go out tonite and do something," said Urd. 

tonight :)

   Ranma lifted an eyebrow.  "Wanna bet?" 
   For the boys, this was yet another ego-crushing night.  Urd and
Washu had displayed mind-boggling bowling skills, while Nuku had made
good use of her targeting systems (although the boys didn't know
this).  Ranma never bowled in his life, and he hated losing in any
sort of sport, especially to GIRLS.  Mamoru was just getting sick of

I'd think Ranma would pick it up pretty fast though, with his aptitude for
physical activities.  Mamoru and Ataru are out of luck :)

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SCENE:  kitchen.  Ranma is frozen like a statue, phone in hand,
        Nuku on lips.  Nuku finally breaks the kiss, while
        Ranma is still frozen in shock, although he's turned an
        unnatural shade of pale and his eyes are wide open in shock.

Nuku:  Hihi, Ranma-kun!

Hehe :)

to set out on noble quests.  They can start a war or stop it.  They
can make a poor man feel rich and make a rich man beg.  A beautiful
girl is a shining light, a ray of hope, a promise of a better
tomorrow.  Beautiful girls, my friend, make the world go 'round."
   "So... you're really chasing after a better tomorrow?"

Heh!

   "Oh!  That looks fun!"  With a quick leap, she attached herself to
the ceiling too.

Heh!

ATARU:  (scowls) I was taking a show once while he was dishwashing.

shower

   *POW*
   "OOW!  What kinda game is this?!"
   "S'called 'sparring', Ataru.  Thought ya wanted to play"
   "Waitase-"
   "NukuNukuKIIIIIICK!"
   *WHAM*
   "Uh oh.  Is Ataru-kun okay?"
   "Um... I think so."

BWHAHAHAHA!

        appointments to keep.
ATARU:  Gonna find a date over at the junior high, eh?

Heh.

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SCENE: Kitchen.  Again.
ATARU:  Say, you guys DO realize there's a camera in here, yeah?

<RANMA and KYOSUKE stare into the camera, turning pale.>

RANMA/KYOSUKE:  Uh oh.

Heh :)

So is Washuu going to fix Nuku's problem or leave it?


John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. Kansas         
ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu       
rhea@tass.org              http://www.tass.org/~rhea/falcon.html
rhea@maison-otaku.net      http://www.maison-otaku.net/~rhea/

        Priss smiled.  "This is Admiral Priscilla S. Asagiri of House
Serenity.  Request permission to help you kick some giant monster
ass.  So did this thing crawl out of your garbage can or what, sis?  It
looks like some leftovers evolved into a new life form."

--Dance of Shiva, Chapter 19.