On Sat, 04 Oct 1997, Hunter Kid <guilds@mail.serve.com> wrote:

I like this fic; it's nicely written.  (I don't particularly agree with a
few of the points mentioned within, such as I think Ryoga would have wished
for a cure to his curse rather than Ranma's death, but they're nitpicks,
and the way they're presented is obviously necessary to the story, so I'll
let them slide. ;)

My main complaint:

What's with Nodoka?  She's never shown to even remotely this...well, nasty,
for lack of a better word, in the manga, and what she says to Ranma - "If
you don't choose Yohko-san, you will no longer be my son" - is sort of OOC
for her, if you ask me.

	Well, My own interpretation is a mix of A: Hmm, she and Genma do 
make a nice couple, and B: Almost every character in the Ranma storyline has 
some personal obsession that they tend to get a little crazy in the pursuit 
of.  I think we've just learned what Nodoka's obsession is, Devil Hunting.

Other than Nodoka's behavior, I didn't notice anything wrong with this fic.
(Well, I don't find Ranma to be a particularly good looking person as a
guy (definitely not as good as you made him out to be), but then, I'm a guy
too, so... ;)

Keep up the good work.

Hunter Kid
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