You know.. this was an excellent fic. Which is why I hated it so
much. *sigh*
Dammit, Scott, you managed to punch all the right buttons. The
"You've got a higher Destiny" thing that I hate and resent so much. The
need for self sacrifice in the name of something you don't even believe
in. And the attitude that there is a Higher Plan somewhere that is SO much
more important than our tiny little lives. *angry disbelief*
Yet at the same time, you've taken all the elements I hate so
deeply and woven them into a truly excellent fic. Your phrasing is
elegant, your story-crafting superb. You've managed, with this story, to
do something that happens rarely.. write something that I utterly loath,
yet will re-read as often as possible out admiration for the story.
*frustrated sigh*
At least warn a guy when you're going to write something this
good, okay?
And thanks for doing the story. It was good. Damned good.
Ed Becerra
"Dreamers may die, but the dream is eternal..."