Hmm... blow it, can't talk about this one without some small:
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LOOK
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Heh heh heh... this one, I LIKE!

One of the more palatable uses of magic foods in a story(pun intended), most
magic spice stories grate, this one didn't, at least not to me.

The double single-quotes were a bit strange, but that's a much of a muchness.
It probably went slightly too long, dragging a bit by the time Ranma was
asked for his 'contribution' to Shampoo and Akane's... happiness. You might 
want to consider slightly shortening it, and I don't think I saw Mousse's 
reaction. (Which I'd love to see, after all, in an Amazon soceity, how would
they view him trying to attack a female to get his love? Probably not well,
he might have his hands tied by the laws of his people. Might be an amusing
scene.)

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