This really does need to go private, but before it does, I have to say I
stand with Nick. I read both of your analysis of the C&C and the counter
analysis and I can't get over the fact that what David did sounded a lot
more like heckling then C&C. If you think a story is heavy-handed, tripe,
and overblown, just say so. There is no need at all to parody, heckle, and
mock every paragraph, that's not what C&C is about. It's supposed to be
reccomendations on how to improve a story. Not a tearing a story down.

Ray "The Texas Ryoga"

p.s. I agree with Nick on another subject. Two people in love act that way.
They really do. And  when two people who are very close and in love, they
know how the other persons mind works and can read thoughts and emotions in
the slightest gesture or look. Believe me, I know, it happens between me and
a very special lady.