I call it Home Is Where The Goddess Is.

Charming title.

Her skin tingled as she let out a rather lustful (?) moan.

How about passionate instead?

As for Keiichi, I still think it would have been easier if he became a god. 
Oh well, nothing for you to worry about there.

While technically she was over forty, she looked little more than 

twenty-five.

Wrong! That would imply that she was born in the 1980s. She should be about 
60 by 2032.

	"One of my children is celebrating her birthday today, Megumi." 

Belldandy
answered.
	Belldandy smiled. "It's Alanna's."<<

Just how does she know that? In chapter 2, you implied that Alana was in no 
condition to say anything when Belldandy found her. But if Belldandy found 
out through other sources, she should know by now what had tragedy happened 
to Alana, yet there is no indication of this either. You should really 
clear this up.

Finally, how about making someone from BGC a former child of Belldandy?