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:From: "Titanus Aegis" <titanus_aegis@hotmail.com>

:Hello mina,
:
:It's my first post (or is it?). I decided to write this while in the 
:Halloween Spirit. I haven't looked at it much, so I really don't know 
:whether it's any good or not.

"The feet were broken, and could not carry the verses."  -- from AS YOU LIKE
IT.

You need a consistent meter.  Many of the lines run too long, come up short,
or switch rhyme schemes.

As BOTH comBATants STRUCK and PARried, CHInese THREATS MINGled with 
UPper-CLASS damNAtions.
In the MIDST of ALL this BATtle POOR, unLUCKy RANma, to his BAD LUCK, in 
CURiOsity WONdered
HOW this ROYal MESS could POSSsibly WORsen beYOND the CURrent SITuAtion.
At that MOment a SPAtula FLEW by his HEAD, and MADE him reGRET what he 
had PONdered.

-- David