<snort>

<snicker>

<guffaw>

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

I loved it!

Real C&C:
I wouldn't use Kiyone's viewpoint - given, that leaves you with very little
else to work with, but it was obvious the moment you used her POV that it
was going to be Ryo-ohki.  Well, it was to me.

Nice work, though.

--
Christopher "God-boy" Angel
cja124@mail.usask.ca      http://www.engr.usask.ca/~cja124
"Some people LOOK marvelous, some people ACT marvelous.
I? I just AM marvelous." - anonymous