| Subject: Re: [FFML] (draft)[AMG!/Hellblazer] Dire Fates - pt 1 |
| From: Chan Wei Lik |
| Date: 11/20/1997, 11:16 AM |
| To: "'FFML'" <fanfic@fanfic.com> |
Reply-to: "weimin@pl.jaring.my" |
I love to see how this one pans out. But could you not put the Japanese dialog in <> brackets please? It makes it seem like they're thinking, not talking. Second, contrary to popular opinion, Peorth's domain is NOT forever. The closest possibility is mystery.