A few nits....

	First off, it takes a day or three for the fertilized ovum to
properly imbed itself to the uterine wall, so the 'ahah, you're preggers'
but rang most false.

	Secondly, I think it would be a pretty danged difficult to pound
reality into Tatewaki's head (the only way of explaining the circumstances
of the Curse to him that I think he'd comprehend is not that easy to
arrainge on short notice).  As for Ko-chan, I remain leery of saddling her
with the likes of Mikado, but that is largely my bias.

	Thirdly, why oh why oh _WHY_ must you insist on sadding Shampoo
with Mousse!?!  It would be more forgivable if he grew up and they
developed thier relationship after some time, but _Cologne_ of all people
facilitating his efforts to force her to marry him is enough to make me
scream (ICYHN, I have yet to see why Mousse deserves more consideration
than Kuno or Tsubasa). 

	Fourth, Akane was _way_ to calm about the entire P-Chan thing ^_-

HTG