"Thomas Schmidt" <Tschmidt@mailgate.trader.com> wrote:

Well, looks like Gary covered all the grammar stuff...I'm not sure 
he's right here, though.  There's lots of opportunity for angsting 
for Ranma, Genma, and Nodoka.  And then, of course, there's what 
happens when Genma and Soun realize that the person who needs to be 
engaged to a Tendo is no longer Ranma...

Sure, but that kind of thing could have worked with any character the
same age as Ranma. Kuno, for example. (Now THERE'S a story for ya...)
There's gotta be a good reason that Keiichi was chosen to be in this
story, and I don't think it's there yet.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics