Great story!! Great setup!! I can see that you are going with our current
incarnation of the JLA. I am a HUGE JLA fan and I love this idea. (I was
kicking it around with a friend of mine last week, but yours is better then
what we came up with). You might want to have some changes to Linda Park...
after all, she's Korean. One of the fastest ways to end up in a fight is to
call a Korean a Japanese, there is some history there and the two countries
just don't mix much. But..... if you can swing it...

As to ideas?... hey, we have the Justice League here. What else do they do.
Besides the alien incursions (thank you Mr. Biles) What about the JL saving
us from the most evil menace in the whole world. Happosai. (only make him a
little more vicious and you have a winner) Put him on the Know-Man level...
or maybe Herb as Darkseid? (Hey, Lime and Mint, Orion and Mongul and other
assorted minions of Darkseid. yes, yes, I know that right now Orion is a
good guy, but still...)

Keep up the great stuff... and hey, could we possibly see the appearance of
Zauriel?

Sweet water and light laughter
Ray "The Texas Ryoga"