I just finished it. I only have one thing to say.
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
<Falls out of chair laughing>
That was good. Write more. I could imagine the same thing except with Ryoga 
getting lost. RANMA, PREPARE TO DIE!!!!! Wait. Ranma's not here.
It was absolutely hilarious. A little on the long side, though. I can imagine 
a series based on this. SHAMPOO-CHAN: AMAZON CRIMEFIGHTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
HER BELL OF JUSTICE STRIKES FEAR IN THE HEARTS OF CRIMINALS AND DARKFIC 
WRITERS EVERYWHERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!