Hey everybody,

I was thinking about which direction I should take with my "Two Fifty
Seven" fic, and I can't decide on what route to take. I figured that I
should just get a few opinions on it.  Here's what I've thought of so
far:

1) Ross Griffmoy continues to get smacked around and beat up when
cursed.  Everyone would knock him out at least once when this thing is
over...  :)

2) Ross uses a few brain cells and starts taking precautions for getting
into potentially harmful situations... he still gets smacked around, but
not as much.  :)

3)  A certain panty stealing old fart decides to take the exchange
student up as his next pupil for a while... but if you think he'll be
powerful, think again.  :)

The main reason why I'm asking for opinions is because I'm guilty of
writing a self insertion/new character fic, and I seriously don't want
the new character to come off as being perfect or whatever, 'cuz he's
far from it.  A good chunk of the cast doesn't like him because of his
curse, a few feel sorry for him yet will beat the holy hell out of him
because of his curse, and if you're wondering about what Ranma & Ryouga
think of the guy... well, I haven't decided on that yet.  :-) It might
be good, it might be bad... who knows.

Anyway, I'd just like opinions/thoughts/comments or whatever.  Thanks,
and reply privately please.

:)

--Adam Griffin
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