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Jeffrey "OneShot" Wong

Ranma 1/2: Untitled


     It was the year 3476 when all humans were wiped off the face of the Earth
and all the space colonies in surrounding planets, for that last human had
undergone genetic enhancement, making their right to be called human void.
Humans gave up their humanity when they started toying with the blueprint God
had given them. They lost their potential to become a higher lifeform when they
genetically altered their DNA. Although born with inhuman strength and thinking
abilities, the superhumans were doomed to remain nothing more than superhumans,
never able to progress in their humanity and evolve into a higher lifeform.
Although every superhuman looked human and acted human, they had no right to
consider themselves human anymore.
  Two humans had come close to evolving to another lifeform, but they had died
of old age well over a millenium ago. One human was called Ranma Saotome. Having
died at the age of 300, Ranma had reached omnipotent powers, rivaling that of
small countries. Only one other human came close to rivaling his powerlevel, and
his name was Ryoga Hibiki. He, too, had died at the age of 300, for Ranma and
Ryoga had killed each other.
  Together, although enemies, they had come so close to harnessing god-like
powers that they only needed a few more years of training to reach their full
potential. The entire human population had been terrified of their extreme power
that they had even gone to war against the two, never coming close to beating
one of them, let alone two.
  And now, the year is 3505 when these so called humans, who were suposed to
brilliant due to genetic enhacements, were stupid enough to actually resurrect
Ranma and Ryoga, arrogant enough to think they could control them. That was
their first mistake. Also, they hadn’t given them genetically enhanced bodies,
thinking they would be even more powerful with those bodies, thus, they were
given human bodies. That had been their second mistake.


-OneShot
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