For those of you interested in my story and especially for those who gave
me feedback on it:
I've made a few revisions to the story up to the bank scene and posted them
on my personal homepage.  Please log on and look it over again.  The url is
http://home.earthlink.net/~lfontenot/RanmasAngels.html 
I've completely changed the page layout, due to the most common advice from
FFML readers, and expanded a bit on certain scenes.  Do any of you think it
would be worth it for me to write about some of what happens during Ranma's
training of Kazuko now?  Are there any plot elements that need further
exposition?

A brief overview of the story:  Ranma has a fight with Akane over a
misunderstanding resulting from his secretly going off to train a young
girl in Martial Arts.  Akane later learns he really was innocent, and wants
to apologize, but Ranma in the meantime gets caught in a hostage situation
where he cannot act openly for fear of the other hostages being harmed as a
result of his fighting.  The hostages are being held by a Japanese
terrorist group who demand the release of a famous terrorist leader being
held by the police.  Ranma is forced to endure the crisis in female form
without fighting back.  Due to TV coverage, all his friends, fiancees, and
enemies learn about the situation, and the girls get together and decide to
cooperate in rescuing Ranma.  
Larry W. Fontenot
Senior Technician
Earthlink Tech Support
http://home.earthlink.net/~lfontenot/