Katsuragi Expedition.........Members........Gendo Rokubungi of Nekomikoka University.

If memory serves, there was more than one before the second impact right?

I might need more information on this one, keep in touch.

Try to find the backers for the expedition. Be careful they don't try to bump you off for being too nosey.

	"AOSHIMA!? PLEASE, he spends all his time chasing that
foreign girlfriend of Kiichi's. He's no help at all."

Keiichi.

	"I am the goddess Belldandy. A mutual friend from the
future has told me and Kamisama of your reason for being here."

As I said before, there's really no need to bother with this.

	Belldandy seemed to be trying not to laugh. "I've seemed
to have forgotten it myself."

While Belldandy may try to conceal information, she'll never delibrately lie.

	*A goddess taking night classes?* "I don't know. maybe.
I just don't know."

Cut this out too. Bell only goes to classes with Keiichi. And he definitely doesn't take night classes.
If you don't mind me saying so, the whole scene with Bell is rather akward and contrived. I suggest you just drop it.

	"I'll go to Nerima. I'll hunt down this disturbance and
I'll neutralize it all by myself!"

This will be sufficient introduction of the goddesses.

Also you used "coarse" when you should have used "course". There are several other word errors, but I'm sure you can find them yourself.

I'll be waiting to see the next chapter.