Subject: Re: [FFML] [Tenchi/TtP] [fanfic] Second Impact: Tenchi {DRAFT}
From: Andrew Huang
Date: 1/15/1998, 5:06 PM
To: Christopher Angel
CC: Fanfic Mailing List <fanfic@fanfic.com>

A little word of introduction:

This is part of a series of stories that are part of Turn the Page.  They
show some of the events that shaped my Crystal Tokyo and the people that
inhabit it.

I call them Inserts.
	At last, some more of TtP. ^_^ Even if it's not the main
storyline.
	Hey...hmm.

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Second Impact: Tenchi
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	Is this supposed to be Second Impact or Third Impact, though? The
Third Impact fits more closely with your definition of Ascension--the
Second Impact was an accident that wasn't intended to advance the human
species, just an experiment that got out of hand.

	<snip>
	Very nice. I think you're finding the touch for this sort of
thing, the powerful introspection piece. It feels a little short,
perhaps.... But that's probably just me. Good job.

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