In a message dated 98-03-01 01:30:02 EST, you write:

Your attachment is still coming out with garbage at the beginning and end
 pieces.  Might I recommend that rather than sending an attachment you copy
 it into an e-mail directly and send it out that way. 

I might try that next time, though I'm not looking forward to typing it twice.

Overall I've found

 this to be a very interesting story.  my one complaint is that you have
 Ranma's Parent's listed as Deceased with no children on this time line.
 Rather than that you might want to consider having them deceased in the
 second impact.

I thought about doing that, but I wanted a clear differance between the two
worlds.

  Additionally, will you be doing anything with the Tendo's?

 Might be interesting to see the reaction of an Adult Nabiki, Akane, &

Kasumi

 to meeting a young Ranma who has absolutely no memory of any of them.  I
 look forward to seeing where you go with this story.

I've been trying to come up with ways to bring some of the other Ranma cast
into the story. Prefrably the Tendo's from Ranma's time.

Some of the ideas I have thought of or have gotten thourgh C&C  include:

There's a Demon/Dojo Destroyer that only Ranma can destroy.
Colone helps so she can get Shampoo's Airen back. (They don't care about
Ranma's haritage.)

Happosai wants his Ranma-chan back and send's Soun, Akane, and Pantyhose.
("Bring back my Ranma-chan and You'll get your new name.")

The PI made a mistake and now the wedding is back on. Once they find Ranma.
Once again Colone helps. (So she and Shampoo can get Ranma back.)

Of course with all of the above Ranma still doesn't remember them. If he goes
with them is quistionable.

Got any other ideas? Anybody?

Anyways thanks.

James