Gary,

I'm glad you liked the story.

Thanks for the grammar corrections.

The orginal draft had the fight between Ukyo and Shampoo and how they
were trying to destroy each other's meal. Let's simply say that I
simplified it tremendously. GRIN. (Kodachi did get involved, and
somebody had to tell Nabiki.)

Whenever I fix this I will spend more time with Ranma and Akane.

And I will probably go with your suggestion but adding Ranma's "No!" to
the beginning of the story.

thank you
jeff shelton
jws1@webtv.net