<huge snippage>

Gotta say I liked this one a lot more than the first one...which struck me
as very disturbing, really.  But this release has convinced me that, at
least, you're committed to following through on the really tough questions
you've raised here.

I was thrown off a little by Ranma's last enocounter with Kunou.  After
what happened with the Tendous he's still willing to use his powers to
'fix' people's minds?  At the very least it seems like he'd try to start
small, if this really is necessary to make it possible to restore the
Tendous to their base state.  I dunno.  This just stuck out to me as not so
much impossible but just not explained enough.

The various Nabiki and Akane scenes were well-done...Kasumi will have to be
dealt with quickly, though.  Will be interested to see how this is worked out.

And now Ryouga.  Oy.  While the premise of this fic requires that the
Tendous' condition remain unfixed for a while, it seems like Kunou hasn't
been really resolved at this point...it's your story, but if it were me I'd
feel uncomfortable about having to balance yet another story thread at this
point.  And if I were Ranma I'd have a nervous breakdown.

---Addison, who in all honesty read the fic a couple hours ago so he may be
off on a couple points.  Just tossing in my thoughts.
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