Oops, sorry about the previous post.  Accidentily hit the send button
before I wrote anything.  Here's the real C&C.  Hope it helps!  Great
Story!

Anand Rao wrote:

"I want him to strong in the Art too!  Loving him, nurturing him, and

	him to <be> strong in *missing a word*

talking to him is not mutually exclusive to that goal!  You -must- realize
that.  If you had, Ranma would have any where near the number of problems

	Ranma <woundn't> have anywhere *you probably meant this instead*

understood Ryoga's feelings completely.   "I haven't even scene any of my
family in years, they're all lost too," Ryoga continued.

	I haven't even <seen> any of *spelling*

to hate you.  Believe me, I've tried!  You are and idiot and a jerk!  And I
-still- think Akane deserves better than you, but I just can't hate you,"

	You are <an> idiot and *spelling*

"I think we may want to hold of the -that- idea for awhile, wouldn't you
agree, Tendo-san?" Nodoka quickly interrupted.  Soun glanced at Nodoka then

	*missing a word in there somewhere*

Akane visibly relaxed.  The glanced at each other simultaneously and
blushed.  Soun shook his head ruefully.  (Well, at least they're not

	relaxed.  <They> glanced at *spelling*

spend the rest of their lives worrying what the world will do their
children; and no one in your life will ever love you more than your mother,

	the world will do <to> their *is this the word?*

The rest of the household was already present at the dining table as Ranma
sat down next to Akane.  "Are all packed Ranma?" Akane asked as Kasumi and

	"Are <you> all pack, Ranma?"  *missing a word*

regard. He used to inhale everything in site.  I amazed he survived all
those years on the road with my cooking!" Nodoka exclaimed, laughing softly.

	site.  <I'm> amazed he *spelling*
	on the road <without> my cooking!"  *spelling*

"How -did- you end up a person like. . . him?" Ranma asked.  This was a
subject he had been curious about for a long time.

heh... haven't we all wondered about that

"That. . . is a long story;  one that I will tell you tomorrow.  There's no
rush, after all, we're going to be staying her for a while, right?"  Nodoka

	to be staying <here> for a while *spelling*

The End