>From : Teknos Warhammer [teknoplus@hotmail.com]

    On an important note: I am not satisfied with this one. I will
rewrite it so that it will be better once I get back.

You'd better. It's terrible. Looks like you rushed it too much. Everything 
went by in a hurry. It was just one scene to the next in a blur. Hardly any 
time to even peek inside the characters' heads.

    Until my next fic... in 2000.

Don't disappoint us!