Cute setup, but you should tru to do something about the non-ACCII
quotes.
Ranma/Akane, Shampoo/Ukyo: No Comments Needed
It's official, the Kuno's _are_ a dysfunctional family.
Minor Nit: I see no real reason why Mousse would hide his
connections with Cologne from Nabiki (I can see a rational for doing the
converse although I doubt Cologne would have much against such a _cunning_
wimp).
Nice touch about Kasumi and Tofu's double life. Even nice touch
about the two people outwardly most eager about the Ranma/Akane match are
the only people who really oppose it.
Ryoga: I don't think the entire thing about Akiri is needed.
especially as it seems that you are setting P-chan up to kick over the
central suppourt of the entire mansion of cards <evil grin>
Feel free to continue with this.
HTG