Well, you know, I just got my fanfic back, and I opened it up and I saw that
the story had all these funky spaces in it, and didn't show the paragraphs
right.  I appologize for that.  I had originally written it on Microsoft Word,
and had just copied and pasted it from that doc file to the mail, so I guess
that's what screwed it up.  Hopefully it's easy enough to read besides that.
I'll try to fix it in the future!

--  Erin, Unfortunate Victim of Spring of Drowned Finch
            Knight of the True Fiance