Phillip Masters <PhilMasters@webtv.net> wrote:

Okay, this story does bear some resemblance to a fanfic by Jeff 
"Oneshot" Wong, but believe me it will not copy it.  I tried to get a 
hold of him personally as well, but I couldn't find his page... if 
anyone has information on him give it up, please.  C&C would be very 

I think the story you're thinking of is not by OneShot, but rather
Megane 6.7 <fcasper@yesic.com>. Can't remember the name of it.

much appreciated, as this is one I would like to stick with (finally), 
and I want to know if it's worth it.  I think that Oneshot's idea of 
Ranma falling for an ordinary girl was good, and while other fics have 
been written like it, there are probably fewer of them than any other 
type.

Well, all I can say is that you have your work cut out for you. It's
going to be tough to convince us (well, me, anyway) that Ranma would be
satisfied choosing an ordinary, non-martial artist woman.

I found the intro scenes very amusing, BTW, especially the bit with the
insurance salesman. One punctuation note: Apostrophes are for
possessives. Don't write Tendo's unless you mean something that belongs
to the Tendos.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics