Subject: [FFML] The Official Synopsis List Review April 25 - March 1
From: Elsa Bibat
Date: 5/9/1998, 9:16 AM
To: "'ffml@fanfic.com'" <ffml@fanfic.com>

Disclaimer:
The opinions in this review are not shared by the Synopsis list
moderators. They are the opinions of the reviewer, namely one
Elsa Bibat. 

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA !!!!!!!!

Oh, sorry about that. I just read from my copy of Inquest that
there are rumors of a Sailor Moon RPG out this fall. It seems
that I'll be saving up again if that rumors true. <sigh> The 
things I do for anime.........like the time I dated that...<blush>

Forget I said that.

Anyway, I'm starting to like reviewing fics in this manner.
Well, since this baby's a bit delayed I have to hurry up.

On with the reviews !


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[BubbleGum Crisis]

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Title: Insane in the Membrane2: The Insanity Contenuies
Series: Bubblegum Crisis
Genre: hummor (What'ja think with a name like that?)
Author: Jusenkyo Guide
Email: jusenkyoguide@mailcity.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/6549

Date Sent to FFLM: 5/1/98

A good laugh for anyone out there. It's nice work and        
it almost reaches Ryoucilo's level of humor. Hmmm..
I wonder if that's a compliment or an insult ?

Anyway, the fic is great sequel to Jusenkyo Guide's
original Insane in The Membrane. And yes he's a lot 
better speller than the entry above shows.       

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[Crossover]

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Title: Eternity's Tears, book I, chapter 1 revised
Series: megacrossover
Genre: DARK
Author: Jess, the LilTigre
Email: jhardy@campbellsvil.edu

Oooooh, Cris-sama shows up ! ^_^

Anyway, this fic has certainly got my attention. The
unlikely combination fo the crossover is going to  
make a real interesting read. The amount of  gore
I think will go up as the chapters progress but hey
I can take it. I'll be waiting for future chapter. 

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[Devil Hunter Yohko/La Blue Girl]

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Title: Dark Queen's Reign ch.6
Series: Devil Hunter Yohko/La Blue Girl
Genre: Lemon
Author: Dark Schneider
Email: drkschneider@ibm.net

Date Sent to FFML:  May 1, 1998
Size:  82 Kb

Oooookay, let me just say I don't watch the two
listed series....much.

<WHAM>

READER NO HENTAI ! Get your mind out of the gutter. 
Anyway, the fic is a lemon, there's nothing more to say
except it has a plot. That's all I have to say. Now, excuse 
me I have to go to the bathroom. ~_^

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[Dragonball / Ranma 1/2]

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Title: Not Even You, 5 - Gokuu's new student; an enemy reborn
Series: Dragonball / (Ranma)
Genre: Action-comedy
Author: Ronny Hedin
Email: thark@swipnet.se
Homepage: http://nabiki.newberry.edu/thark/fanfic/

Date Sent to FFLM: May 1, 1998
Size: 17 Kb

Weird and funny in it's own way. It has a very charming  
aspect to it especially this chapter. Heck, the thing really
strating to look like a Ranma fic. 
 
Of course a Ranma fic with green skinned men, people
who could level small planets....         

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[Original]

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Title: Macho Caballo Chapter 23 `Well Begun is Half Done'
                              (was `First Impressions')
Series: Macho Caballo
Genre: Humor/Drama/Original
Author: James Eades (James and the Bluejay)
Email: jeeades@ix.netcom.com
Homepage: http://www2.netcom.com/~jeeades/macho.htm

Date Sent to FFML: April 24, 1998
Size:  39 Kb
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Title: Macho Caballo Chapter 24 `When We Meet Again for the First Time'
Series: Macho Caballo
Genre: Humor/Drama/Original
Author: James Eades (James and the Bluejay)
Email: jeeades@ix.netcom.com
Homepage: http://www2.netcom.com/~jeeades/macho.htm

Date Sent to FFML: April 25, 1998
Size:  35 Kb

James, you're doing some of the best work I've ever read on the FFML.
Congratulations again on keeping up the quality of your work and 
keeping me interested in something that, if done in a lesser way, 
would put me to sleep.

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[Ranma 1/2]

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Title: Rejected Part 8
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: Dark, Sad
Author: Lord Archive
Email: archive@mich.com
Homepage: www.mich.com/~archive/anime

Date Sent to FFLM: April 27, 1998
Size: 23 Kb

Congratultions, Lord Archive for making me feel sorry for
Happosai. That is no mean feat. And the fic is I admit
one of your best ! 

Keep up the good work ! 

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Title: Crisis on Earth-R!
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: spamfic
Author: Scott K. Jamison
Email: majks@cyberx.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Flats/5990

Date Sent to FFML: May 1, 1998
Size: 6 Kb

Interesting. That's all I can say. 

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Title: Cat's Prey
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: Horror story
Author: Gary Kleppe
Email: kleppe@execpc.com
Homepage: http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html

Date Sent to FFML: April 28, 1998
Size: 51 Kb

The genre is totally correct in description of this story. Hell,
only one writer has forced me to skip pieces of his work so
I can avoid the quesy little feeling in my stomach and running
around checking the windows and doors and other shadowy 
places. And Mr. Kleppe's work chilled me to the bone. Heck, 
you put someone who hikes up mountains at night into
paranoia mode. Admittedly your work would have been much
more horrifying if you put in more details....but heck it's
enough for me.           

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Title: Doors Best Left Unopened part 8
Series: Ranma
Genre: Serious/Dark
Author: Mark MacKinnon
Email: emmack@ibm.net
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Ginza/8225

Date Sent to FFML:  April 29, 1998
Size:  89 Kb

Mr. MacKinnon let me kiss you <smooch>.

That's thanks for creating such a great work. 

Now let me get my whip so you'll crank out the next chapter
faster. <crack> I hate cliffhangers ! ^_^  
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Title: Without Friends, Part 2: Without Direction v0.1
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: Alternate Universe/Slightly emotional
Author: Jonathan Ng
Email: jonathan@worldy.com
Homepage: none

Date Sent to FFML: April 27, 1998
Size: 11 Kb

A bit of an improvement, but still I know you could do better.
This chapter is certainly better than the last one, polish up
your prose style more. A few more adjectives, a few more
details and you won't have me dozing off.      
                            
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Title: Nabiki - New Horizons  Chapter 14 'Ninjas & Other Myths'
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: Continuation / Focus Nabiki Tendo-Lawrence
Author: G.L. Sandborn
Email: sandborn@microlink.net
Homepage: www.microlink.net/~sandborn

Date Sent to FFLM:  April 29, 1998
Size:  85 Kb

Uhhh....I'd probably try to kiss you like what I did with
Mr. Mackinnon but I heard you already got a wife....

Anyway, another excellent chapter. And once again
I advise anyone who hasn't read this to get hold of the
earlier chapters and start reading.Trust me you won't 
regret it !

Now, Greg <crack> faster with the next chapter ! ~_^
  
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[Ranma 1/2 / Sailor Moon]

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Title: A Different Viewpoint 16
Series: A Different Viewpoint
Genre: Ranma/SM
Author: Christopher Olsen
Email: tagan1@pacbell.net
Homepage: www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Dojo/1449/

Date Sent to FFLM: April 28, 1998
Size: 36 Kb

OK, the series is a good one. Quite good. Though there
are a few problems with spelling a few times and grammar,
the fic is very good. I also advise you to get the earlier
chapters. The series may not rank way up there, but for 
me it has that certain kind of charm.              
     
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[Ranma 1/2 / Slayers]

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Title: Half a Sorceress, chapter 4:Dash! The Hair-rising Race Across China!
Series: Ranma 1/2 & Slayers
Genre: Crossover/alt. history
Author: Jussi Nikander
Email: Jussi.Nikander@alien.nixu.fi
Homepage: N/A, but previous parts stored at
www.users.fl.net.au/~bcadwgan/Anime.htm

Date Sent to FFML: April 27, 1998
Size:aprox. 50 Kb

The fic gets my recommendations. It is definitely one of
the best Slayers fic around along with Twoflower's "Slayers
Reflect".

I wanna see what happens when they arrive at the Tendo
Dojo. Hurry up, Jussi !


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[Repost / Corrections]

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Title: Past/Future Chapter Three
Series: Ranma/Eva
Genre: Crossover
Author: Long Ngo aka CreatorofKings
Email: ShortYes@aol.com
Homepage: underconstruction

Date Sent to FFML: 4/17/98
Size: 30.2 Kb

I think I've already reviewed this part last posting so I'll skip
it.

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[Sailor Moon / Evangelion]

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Title: For Unto Us a Child is Born
Series: Sailor Moon / Neon Genesis Evangelion
Author: LeVar Bouyer
Email: l_bouyer@csunix1.lvc.edu
Homepage: http://csunix1.lvc.edu/~l_bouyer/

Date Sent to FFML: April 29, 1998
Size: 22 Kb

One word: Weeeeiiirrrddd. 

Anyway, this fic is a nice enough work... but hell, I  
dislike the pink-haired brat. I rather wait for the 
Usagi-is-Misato one.
      
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[Shoujo Kakumei Utena]

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Title: ...Sunawachi, Kiseki <...In Other Words, Miracles>
Series: Shoujo Kakumei Utena
Genre: Introspection
Author: Scott Johnson
Email: zagyg@io.com

Date Sent to FFML: April 30, 1998
Size: 18 Kb

Hey, someone other than Andrew Huang responded to my challenge !
Sorry about not giving C&C earlier but heck I was up to my neck in fics
to write and review that it broke my usual routine of reading every fic
that comes down the pike.

Anyway, an excellent fic if you don't mind me saying. And you brought
up another one of my bad traits, curiosity.  It seems I'll be asking a few
friends about this particular series. The fic really gives you the feel for it.
It's one of the best I've seen, I think on par with Huang's  " I Musn't Run
Away". Keep up the good work !  

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[Tenchi Muyo!]

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Title: Tenchi Muyo:Ryoko's Love
Series: Tenchi Muyo!
Genre: Comedy, Romance, Action
Author: Long T. Tran
Email: EvilDrTran@aol.com
Homepage: http://members.aol.com/evildrtran/index.html

Date Sent to FFML: Late-march to Early april
Size: avg of 34 kb per chapter

A very interesting fic. It's very nicely done and has me waiting
for more. Waiting for the next chapter !            

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<relaxes>

That's everything !

<stretches>

I'm starting work again on my fics and I'll be waiting for the
next Synopsis List. See you next week ! 

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