I only read the first part of this, but it seems to be a script-format
Split Personalities rip-off. :P

Rain Song
http://www.serve.com/guilds/ranma/
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open hk.sig

    He shook his head.  No, natural disasters were all too destructive for
this vague feeling to represent.  
    An assassin!
    Yes, that had to be it.  What else would give a feeling like this?  He
was about to get a knife in the back.  It was so obvious it hurt.  No,
wait, that wasn't what hurt.  Someone was pinching his neck.
    "Hey," he stated irritatedly, coming out of his daze and looking up.
"Oh...er, hiya, Ukyou-chan."   
			 			-from Mirror Images, chapter 3
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