Scott Jamison wrote:

Well, a couple of things...
        Akane's cooking has improved by vol. 36 in the manga to the
point
that it's no longer a major gag.

Well yes, I remember that Akane's cooking improved by the en of the
manga but as far sa I remember she was only able to make an edible curry 
and an okonomiyaki it's a lot more hard to do (belive me last time I
tryed to make one I left the place looking like a mess :) 

        As seen in one story, Nabiki *does* get dates, but has a
notorious reputation for draining the boy's wallet in the process, so
seldom gets second dates.

Oh you mean the whole kinnosuke story... I knew that someone was going
to complain about that, look I didn't said that she didn't got dates but
that they always had an ulterior motive. Anyway I need to think about
that.

        Other than that and a few typos, looking good.

SKJAM!

A few typos? were? I checked this thing maybe 8 or 9 times, and the only
error I really found, was when I was about to send this I spellchecked
this for the last time and by an error I changed all the words "fic" for
a "fib." ^_^&

Thanks for the input.

Tony