A very well-written story that shows how much Kodachi would be capable
of if she put her mind to it.

While Kodachi was well-handled, some of the other characteriaztions
seemed a bit stretched to me. Ranma and Soun should've had more
reluctance to believe that Akane could be a killer, and the former
should've balked more at the idea of staying at the Kunos. While there's
a lot of room for interpretation in Nabiki's character, I have trouble
seeing her bought off with Tatewaki. If she really wanted him, she'd
have gotten him on her own by now. The old reliable cash bribe might be
a better option.

Anyway, I liked it, and would be very interested in reading more if you
have somewhere further to go with it.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics