I'm finished with part fifteen of what probably will turn out to be a 
thirty-part Eva/Ranma crossover... and could really use some C&C on it. 
"Attaboy"s are fine. Constructive advice and debugging is MORE than 
fine. Flames are fine too, so long as they're about something I screwed 
up... <g>

I have three options here...

1)Post all fifteen parts to the FFML. This would be bad, as the fic is 
about 300 pages total and I don't want to spam everybody on my first 
fic.
2)Post only chapter fifteen and hope people can figure things out... 
nah.
3)Post the web page that you can go look it up on... although this takes 
more effort on the part of the reader (and you guys would be doing me a 
massive favor already), it does save everybody the pain of deleting the 
darned thing when they're done. And, since I'm here already... it's at 
http://members.tripod.com/~AvatarHR/pl.html.

Why, do you ask, do I ask for C&C NOW, so late in the writing? Mostly 
because Blade's internet access went spotty this month, and he won't be 
able to do an adequate line-by-line until I hand him a paper copy at 
A-kon. He's spoiled me, I suppose.

Thanks.

Andy Kent

______________________________________________________
Get Your Private, Free Email at http://www.hotmail.com