R--, I mean "Ukyou Kuonji" <UkyouKwnji@aol.com> wrote:

The girl was running as fast as she could for the gate, long hair tied 
back and bobbing with every stride.

Hey! HEY! You cheated! Kuno has SHORT hair and deosn't tie it back!

Other than that, it was good. A clever idea, and well-executed. BTW, you
misspelled "desperately."

Still working on my website at http:\\members.aol.com\index.htm, and 
that's what's really slowed me down... I really would like to know 
someday how the rest of you manage to read all this FFML mail, keep 
your pages current, AND keep writing such voluminous works, all at the 
same time.  I'm amazed.

Well, it helps to selectively delete certain things unread... especially
during an "Adfic challenge." :p


Gary Kleppe (now, if it were a punfic challenge...)
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics