Subject: Re: [FFML] [R1/2][FF] Death of a Housewife
From: Ronny Hedin
Date: 5/28/1998, 5:11 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com
CC: Lara Bartram <lara@emunix.emich.edu>

Lara,

I guess, if I read a synopsis of this, I would probably think "this is
not something I will like", but still, I can't help doing so. It's...
slow, in a positive sense. A better word might be "gentle", I guess.

I must say, though, that towards the end, it swings over from
"down" to "up" a bit too quickly. Especially the scene were Kasumi
reveals her love to Tofuu strikes me as not feeling quite right.

Noticing that Takuma has the same name (I think?), is this the
same continuity that proceeds to the mother/son story? (You know which
one I mean)

No technicalities that I noticed, which at least means it's not rough.


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