"Susan Doenime" <sdoenime@hotmail.com> wrote:

		Fate, however, does not like being ignored. It 
	promptly began it's lifelong offensive against me.

its

	And '45 left a lot of human refuse, too. No homes, no 
jobs, no income. Only winners get serviceman's pensions and GI 
Bills. Losers are asked to kindly go somewhere where we can't 
see you, please.

That explains the Viet Nam veterans' situation... :-P

	These people quickly discovered that its a lot better for 

it's

	Genma nearly dropped the engine. "Gos...Gosunkugi Bono?" 

I KNEW IT!! Gos is related to Sonny! :-)

	"BONO RIP YOUR HEAD OFF!" The sound of very large feet 

Why Voodoo-boy-relative talk like Shampoo?

	"No thanks," Genma quickly replied. Kuno looked vaguely 
disappointed, then smiled. "Oh well. Can I offer you some tea? I 
think it's tea."

This paragraph needs to be split up. It has two different people
speaking.

	He blinked. "I, er, don't have any peasants. There aren't 
any in Japan any more."

Or at least we don't call them that now....

		Heh. If I had only known, I would have had Kiri turn 
	the mist kami out on the street then and there. At least 
	none of your fiancees were older than Japan itself...

Lemme guess... Genma and Ms. Mist turn out to be Kasumi's real parents?
Oh my! ^_^

Anyway, this was a lot of fun. please continue!


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics