Well, this is a banch I've never seen climbed.
  -well, not in anime anyway.
 It's interesting that stuff like this (or a couple of other bars) have
not been done by any other fic writers (somebody correct me if I'm wrong)


 You seem to have the tone down well and if you can keep it consitant
then... hey!

 I say give it a try.

              Neil

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                    I met a Lady in the Meads,
                    Full beautiful, a faery's child,
                    Her hair was long, her foot was light
                    And her eyes were wild.
                                            J.Keats
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           Agent Of Chaos. Robyn, Duke of Amber. Unicorn Knight
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