Gary Kleppe <KLEPPE@execpc.com> wrote:

"Jusenkyo Guide" <jusenkyoguide@mailcity.com> wrote:

	Ryoga flashed a grin that included a fang, "Well I'm the right

guide for that, want a traveling companion?"

for that. Want

What about Akari, BTW? Why isn't he trying to get to her place?

	The same reason Shampoo went back home rather than murdering Mousse
in his sleep.

Overall, very nice emotional drama story.

	A bit sappy for my taste, but not bad technically

The feeling came through quite
well. Just fix up all the technical problems (and pleeeeeeeeeze take

out

the "Ukyo is Ranma's best friend" BS ^_^)

	And the "Ryoga and Ukyo will end up together BS"... and the "Shampoo
only courts Ranma out of tribal obligation BS"... and the....

	Lots of faulty assuptions here IMO.

and you'll have a winner.

	Maybe

Gary Kleppe

HTG
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