Very good start to the fic there. It goes a lot
further in the interactions than Bob Barnes'
"Waiting as Fast as She Can", which also explained
that Madoka got her martial arts skills from the
Tendo Dojo. To be fair, that story was only a
one-shot and dealt more with Madoka wanting to
learn how to defend herself and did not have her
getting close to any of the Tendo girls.

Looks like Ranma will be arriving soon. I look
Madoka reacts to all the chaos Ranma brings with
him. Will Ranma call Madoka 'kawaiikune' as well?
Seeing as she and Akane are very good friends.

Any ways I eagerly await the next chapter.

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Patrick Vera
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