Subject: [FFML] [Ranma 1/2][RAGE FIC/dark][C&C][draft]
From: Rnmalvsakn@aol.com
Date: 6/30/1998, 8:13 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

Ranma Kills!_________________________________________________
Authors pre-note: 
First of all I apologize for any spelling grammar errors as well as any
 formatting errors, if you are on AOL you will probably have to DL this thing
 *shrugs* that's AOL for ya

   This takes place in a series of mine, this will be in part two of my as yet
 unnamed WAFF fic. series, since I know the WAFF thing kinda get's overbearing
 I had planned this scene from the beginning. As sort of a mushy
 relief/emotional outburst, this fic. can stand on it's own though you do not
 have to read the previous parts.
WARNING, WARNING, WARNING!!!!!!! EXTREME VIOLENCE!!!!!

What follows contains adult language and situations it is no where near a
 Lemon since as for right now I refuse to write one, it contains scenes of VERY
 graphic violence and descriptions of a graphic nature�.young readers ABSOLUTLY
 SHOULD NOT read this!  This fanfic deals with what is to me, the single most
 disgusting thing any man could ever do to a woman, Rape. It also deals with
 the raw emotions that I hope would surge through the minds of any human being
 if exposed to this, and how Ranma deals with that. Consider yourself warned.
C&C is not only needed but begged for!  I need to know if I should tone this
 down a little since it will be going into my WAFF series, or if it is fine as
 is, also any help with spelling and grammar would be appreciated, I have spell
 check but the dang things are not all that bright I tells ya! Flames will be
 printed out and fed to the fireplace monster ^_^

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*start*

Walking home after his second successful date with Akane, Ranma was in a cloud
 of euphoria all to himself.  She had , had to go back to the school to pick up
 some books she had forgotten, so he had headed home to wait for her.
 Sauntering down the way, he was casually walking across fence tops mere inches
 wide.  The day was just turning to night with the sun sinking low in the west.
 Ranma decided to take a detour from his usual route and to walk through the
 park and breathe in the sweet Sakura scent and see the promise of the
 beautiful sunset. 
Casually leaping over to the opposite side of the water duct over water that
 had to be 30 feet apart he landed on the opposite sides fence top.  And headed
 in a westerly direction.  Ranma could barely feel his feet hitting the fence
 top he felt as light as a feather.  Finally reaching his turning point He
 jumped to the nearest roof top in this way avoiding all Nerima traffic and the
 associated stress that went with it.
 He was not however bounding from roof top to roof top but simply walking
 across them admiring the world and using all of his senses to their fullest.
 Smelling the crisp late summer breeze and hearing the birds beautiful songs
 and seeing the world through the eyes of  a man in love.
Jumping down off the last roof-top Ranma hit the ground walking and continued
 to his favorite secluded part of the park an area very beautiful and not very
 well known.  Almost there, he slowed down a little as something in the air
 just felt, well wrong.  He could sense a fear, no not fear, terror someone
 nearby feared for their life!  At least he thought so�..he heard no noise and
 saw nothing.  To get a better look he jumped into the nearest tree and looked
 around, unconsciously heading to the same secluded area he had been heading
 towards.  Everything seemed okay except for one detail, the birds were getting
 quieter the closer he came to his secret spot. 
Almost to the rise of the hill that sheltered the area he slowed his progress,
 quite annoyed that his good mood had left him so quickly to be replaced with
 this feeling of dread and terror that something was telegraphing into him like
 live electricity. Unnoticed Ranma's fists started to clench and unclench on
 their own. 
Reaching the crest of the rise still in the dense treetops Ranma's breath
 caught in his throat.  There in the small clearing where the definition of
 what sprang to mind when one thought of gutter trash of the dregs of society.
 Five of them, huge disgusting creatures, one could not really call them men
 simply because to be called one, one must at least resemble one. It must have
 been 90 degrees outside and Ranma was sweating in his light weight Chinese
 silk shirt and the two layers of pants he wore of one water proof the other
 light cotton . 
These creeps, they had to be in a gang, were all dressed in heavy denim pants
 and sporting black leather boots as well as heavy leather jackets to go with
 the boots. Underneath their jackets they all had on to various degrees of
 filth a torn or tattered white shirt. All of them had unshaven faces and their
 greasy unwashed hair clung to the backs on their necks. All of these
 observations flew through Ranma's mind in half a second as his mind assessed
 them. 
While they looked unskilled at any fighting art, most of them overweight or
 not carrying themselves with any poise or grace they were heavily armed with
 clubs and chains and other assorted weapons and their ring leader had what
 looked like a katana strapped to his back, they must be Mafia  he thought to
 himself. Again these observations were flying through his head in mere split
 seconds.   They were all crowded around something and he couldn't quite make
 it out.
Their smell was wafting up through the tree tops and Ranma was about to leave
 for somewhere more pleasant �" They must have been the source of that feeling
 I got earlier.." he said to himself unconvinced.  Turning to leave Ranma heard
 something, sort of a whimper.  Turning back he saw one of the guys bend down
 and raise his right arms, fist clenched and then he slammed it into something,
 it had to have been something soft for Ranma heard no noise, only a low groan.
 Curious now he turned back and was about to call out to them when his heart
 stopped.  One of the gang members moved and the ring leader spoke. "Are ya
 gonna give it up easy bitch or do we hafta do this the hard way?" he sneered.
Ranma's mind froze.  There lying on the ground was a girl, couldn't have been
 more than 16-17. As Ranma watched horrified, the man reached down and tried to
 slip down the girls skirt, dazedly she struggled with him still.  "oooh look
 guys we have a tough one today!" He spat and reached into his pocket and
 pulled out an object �a knife!  "She won't be so tough once I cut off one of
 her ears.  
Ranma's world froze.  Sound slowly filtered out as blood rushed to his head.
 His breath caught in his throat and a burning sensation started to flame in
 his chest and was rapidly spreading through out his body He was so horrified
 he couldn't move.  Everything went in slow motion next, the man raised his
 hand, the knife glinting in the sun as his cohorts cheered him on, grasping
 the almost unconscious girl's hair with his free hand he turned her head to
 cut her, bringing his arm down he moved to strike.
Ranma had never moved so fast in his entire life, barely registering the
 strange noise screaming in the background he leapt into the middle of them.
 The man's arms was stopped short held painfully tight in Ranma's grasp. The
 rest of the gang members had been knocked backwards as he leapt past them,
 they lie stunned on the ground. Suddenly Ranma's world focused again, he
 realized that that strange screaming noise had been himself , what had started
 out as the word No! Hard sort of lapsed into a primal sound like death itself.
 He quickly shut up.
Ranma was, furious!  Shaking with rage a new color of battle aura was forming
 around him, black as ebony it shut out light, and on it's rippling edges a
 crimson red like blood was flicking wildly about like flames from a fire.
 Ranma was livid! 
Again this had all happened in a matter of seconds. The would be attacker just
 stared stupidly at Ranma, the boy looked angry , not that he really cared he
 would kill this arrogant little punk in a minute. The boy was just staring at
 him grasping his knife hand tightly, so shrugging mentally he reached onto his
 back with his free hand unsheathing his razor edged katana and in a fluid
 motion he brought what he thought would be a death blow to the boys neck.
Ranma saw the movement, but his mind was still locked in his rage, he could
 feel the hatred and passion and need to kill this piece of shit burning within
 him. As the katana bore down something long repressed in the expert fighter
 shut down��.his reluctance to kill. Ranma screamed.  He had caught the blade
 in his free hand.  The edge had cut into his palm and cleaved right into the
 bone.  
Furious his aura flared and he squeezed!  The blade snapped in two, both edges
 where broken had traces of blood on them, the other hand squeezed too and
 Ranma not only broke the mans wrist but crushed the bone into almost a powder,
 that sort of injury was very hard to fix.  Whimpering the man fell down.
 Ranma was about to finish him off when he sensed danger from behind.
Twirling on his heel he managed to duck just as a heavy length of chain
 whistled where his head would have been.  A blow that would have seriously
 wounded him or killed him.  Rage possessed Ranma now. It owned him. Giving his
 body in to the malicious impulses surging through him he began to fight.
 Twisting to the other direction split seconds after his first dodge he avoided
 the baseball bat that the other man had swung. The two of the punks looked
 stung, not really expecting the young looking boy to do such a thing. The man
 with the chain rushed at Ranma swinging it above his head.  A stupid thing to
 do really. Ranma side stepped and as he wrenched the chain out of the clumsy
 mans hand, he also landed a viscous crescent kick placed just below the mans
 hip bone, breaking that joint and effectively crippling the man, to his credit
 he stayed standing.  He then smirked as he pulled out a small hand gun and
 casually aimed it at the boy. Ranma smirked too and his aura flared, he could
 sense the other idiot creeping up behind him.
At the last possible second Ranma ducked as the now chainless man pulled the
 trigger.  The bullet whizzed past where his head had been and impacted in the
 throat of the man who had been trying to sneak up on Ranma. That man gurgled
 something unintelligible on his way to the ground, but Ranma was already
 ignored him.  Using his training with ribbons he applied the technique to the
 chain. As the man with the gun stood there dumbfounded ready to take another
 shot, Ranma flicked his wrist and sent the chain out, the sharp metal tip
 ripping into the mans wrist and almost severing it.  The man screamed!  His
 last thought ever on this world was, "Where the hell did my hand go?!"
Ranma heard then another scream, most decidedly female.  Turning he saw the
 coward of a ring leader on his feet and holding the frightened girl by her
 neck in his good arm in a choke hold she was gasping for breath and her face
 was going all pale like, the ring leader was slowly backing up. The anger
 welled up inside of Ranma again, thinking of all the times Akane had been
 dragged off by some ogre, and how terrified the girl must be now.
With super human speed  Ranma crossed the distances between them. Grabbing the
 mans free wrist which was very broken he took that and the now wrenched free
 hand that was holding the girl and twisted him into an over the shoulder
 throw.
The man landed hard as Ranma did not let go of his wrists when he landed but
 kept control of the animal/human.  The girl at this point leaning up against a
 tree fainted dead away. Ranma bringing his foot up above the mans spine poised
 for the killing blow, but hesitated as training refused to let him kill in
 cold blood, disgusted he released the now whimpering like a baby punk and
 turned to the girl to check on her. 
As soon as he did so he regretted it. He had completely forgotten about the
 other two.  Suddenly both of his arms were pinned behind his back one held by
 one man each.  "They must have gone for the rest of their gang Ranma thought�"
 Just as an unseen fist slammed into his kidney from behind. His eyes watered
 and he gasped that had hurt! Looking up he saw 4 of them, 6 in all counting
 the two pinning his arms down.  The man directly in front of Ranma pulled his
 leg back as if to kick, and Ranma knew where that kick was headed. Turning at
 the last possible moment he absorbed most of the blow on his thigh. The men
 laughed as he faked moaned. 
Thinking they had won. He felt the iron grips on his arms release a fraction,
 more then he needed, jumping upward with all his strength, Ranma kicked the
 one on his left in the throat on his way up, killing him in probably one of
 the most painful ways possible, with a crushed windpipe.  The other man's arm
 he had hung onto �.literally. The bloody stump was still in his hand and on
 his way down he could see the shocked expression on the face of the now one
 armed man.  Using it as a club he hit the man over in the back of his neck,
 snapping it.
There were now only 4 on their feet and they were all hesitating.  Ranma still
 furious, had had enough, his rage building his chi up to the critical
 point�.the black aura that surrounded him suddenly flared as the crimson
 flames grew and then focused at where he was holding his hands, which were
 cupped and pointing directly at the group. Developing a new chi blast and not
 even knowing it, all Ranma's mind was aware of was the need to kill.  He could
 sense the life flowing through them and he despised them for it, they did not
 deserve to live, he knew that each and every one of them had raped and killed
 many other helpless girls, maybe even in this same clearing.  His rage
 dominated him and whispering 3 single words to what ever gods that may be,
 Ranma muttered "Burn�in�hell" then released his rage!
The power and energy that flowed from his hands was incredible. The heat from
 the chit blast was so intense that after it burned away the grass and dirt it
 melted the very earth where the men had stood seconds earlier.  Incinerated,
 they simply vanished, ceased to exist. The crater that formed from the blast
 stretched the length of the park and was at places almost 20 feet deep. Rage
 still burning in his eyes which were glowing red, quite unknown to him. He
 turned to the man, the once proud ring leader. The man was on his feet again,
 you could tell he was terrified but was shakily facing Ranma holding a sawed
 off shot gun held in his shaking hand.
"What..what are you?" The man managed to croak out disbelief evident in his
 voice. "All we were doing was havin a lil fun." He protested seeming to think
 that his argument would get elicit sympathy from Ranma.  Ranma shaking his
 head and cracking his knuckles simply walked silently towards the man. Daring
 him to pull the trigger. 
The girl was awake now and as her  vision cleared she sat up leaning heavily
 upon the tree she watched mouth agape as this boy advanced on the now singular
 ring leader. Emotions swirled within her. Terror was still dominating
 everything, but that was quickly being pushed back by the ever growing safety
 she felt in this boy's presence.
 However she wondered how anyone that young could have eyes like that, eyes
 that seemed to look through you, but they weren't directed in her direction he
 was staring at that�.that thing that had held her down, had breathed rancid
 breath into her ear as he pinned her down and tried to force her legs open!
 Her heart almost stopped with revulsion and the terror of the events that had
 happened only maybe 2 minutes ago, she had been sure she was going to die.  
She now watched as the nameless boy slowly advanced on the man, she wondered
 faintly in a passing thought how he was managing to glow black, or any color
 at all for that matter, but dismissed it as a trick of the sun and her
 overwhelmed emotions.  Fascinated she watched as Ranma walked right up to the
 man only maybe 10 feet apart and then gasped as the thing that had hurt her
 sneered and pulled the trigger. Ranma took the hit right in the chest!  He
 went down! His last conscious thought as he went down was, "Please no!  I need
 one more chance I have to save her" ��and somewhere something heard him.
Oh no! Her mind screamed! Get out of here, NOW! Stumbling she tried to get up,
 she had to get out of there!  The man/animal noticed her movements and started
 towards her, limping badly but still moving fairly fast.  She stumbled in her
 hasty run and tripped!  Only maybe 5 feet away from where she had fallen, they
 had hit her so many times when wrestling her to the ground that now she could
 barely stand. She rolled over and looked up into the face of pure evil
 possessed of what can only be called a satanic influence the man leered at her
 and made his way slowly to her. 
Back in the clearing Ranma lay dead in a pool of his own blood. The air was
 silent and no life seemed to move.  Suddenly a small sphere of light grew in
 the middle of the clearing straight out of nowhere! The sphere grew to the
 size of about maybe 6 feet in diameter. Then out stepped a being of what could
 only be described as light. It was apparently female. The creatures beauty
 could not really be compared to anything on the Earth since it was not really
 from that plane of existence.  Stooping down the being pressed her right palm
 on Ranma's chest and wherever she rubbed in it's wake left only healed skin!
 His body healed the being bent her head down and kissed him on the mouth
 fully, breathing life back into him, slowly his chest rose and then fell.
 Breaking the kiss the creature/being/goddess kneeled on the ground next to him
 and whispered into his ear with a voice that could only be described as
 musical if one could hear it, she spoke 5 words into his ear, " Your wish has
 been granted!" 
Back in the woods the man reached down and grasped the helpless girl by the
 hair and moved to push her to the ground, screaming as loud as she could the
 girl clawed, bit, kicked, and did everything in her power to stop him, he
 smirked and stood up, kicking her in the stomach! She doubled over in pain and
 stopped squirming long enough for him to start taking his pants off.
In the clearing the being of light  stood and disappeared back into the light
 from whence she came. Ranma's eyes snapped open and he leapt to his feet!
 Turning to the sounds of a struggle he saw the same girl as before laying
 spread eagle helpless on the ground the man standing in front of her�..taking
 off his pants?!?!?!?! He sprinted towards  them!
"Yes.." the animal/man thought, he was going to enjoy this. The man bent over
 again reaching with his good hand. To grab her again the girl barely conscious
 now struggled weakly. However half way down the man suddenly stopped moving!
 Looking up the girl saw a miracle.  There grasping the man by the back of the
 neck was that same boy!  He was alive!  Her heart leapt into her throat with
 relief!  The boy was obviously still furious and his eyes still shone red, but
 his black aura had been replaced with a white one that was beyond bright. It
 shone so brightly that it hurt her eyes!  Lifting casually with his right arm
 Ranma lifted the man off of his feet. With a mighty heave Ranma tossed him
 into the ground�HARD!  Hard enough to make the ground shake and break the mans
 arm that he had fallen on, luckily for him it had been the previously injured
 arm.
The man leapt to his feet, some of his strength regained and he threw a
 jumping punch at Ranma's head a fist thrown so hard that if it connected with
 a regular mans head it would have broken their nose!  Ranma didn't even
 flinch!  He simply raised his left hand and caught the mans good fist, and
 clamped down hard!  The man was stunned! However he didn't have much time to
 be stunned as the pain suddenly hit him. He looked up and saw a man , not a
 boy, a furious man!  He was blazing with some sort of strange light and the
 look in his eyes was that of murder.  At that moment the man knew what the
 girls whom he had tortured had felt, and he was truly afraid.
Ranma squeezed harder, he could feel the fibers and the sinews in the mans
 hand holding the bones in place on the verge of collapse and he smiled faintly
 as he applied even more pressure, the mans hand broke in every place possible
 and then when Ranma kept squeezing the bones began to shatter and split the
 skin. Looking down with disgust Ranma could see the man's limp member hanging
 out of his almost off pants. 
With a grin Ranma thought of the best way to punish this thing, not to kill
 him, but to make him wish he was dead, in the name and for the honor of all
 the other women whom he had killed and raped. Ranma crouched down and with a
 quick grasp and with the help of the jumping muscles in his legs Ranma
 castrated the man!  His hand dropping the disgusting thing as soon as it was
 free, and continuing with the upward motion Ranma aimed a punch that would
 almost kill but not quite right into the mans neck, hitting him almost as hard
 as he could. Ranma was very satisfied with the sound of snapping cartilage.
 Knowing that the man was doomed to be a paraplegic in prison and that some
 inmate would get to have his way with him for the rest of his miserable life,
 and Ranma smirked!
Turning to the girl he ran quickly to her side his battle aura dying down
 around him ad he ran. Kneeling beside her he cradled her head in his hands and
 helped her sit up. Seeing as she was almost completely naked with her shirt
 torn and her skirt in fragments, when she was in a sitting position he
 shrugged off his silk shirt.   Surprisingly rip free considering that it had
 taken a shot gun blast.  He gently placed it around her shoulders and buttoned
 it up. Glad he always wore another pair of water tight pants under his regular
 pants to keep changing to a minimum when he was splashed he quickly shucked
 off his outer layer of pants and handed them to her and turned his back so the
 girl could put them on privately to hide her nudity. Which she did so while
 lying back down and arching her back to do so. Turning back around Ranma knelt
 beside her again and cradled her shaking body in his arms.
"Are you okay miss?" he asked, she simple looked at him and worked her jaw
 soundlessly, this boy had just killed 7 people and been resurrected and all he
 could say was , "are you okay?" Finally gaining control of her mouth the girl
 looked at those eyes of his, red with rage a minute ago and now a deep blue
 with concern�.. "Wh-who are you?" She managed to ask.
Looking into her eyes in return Ranma said those 6 famous words�.  "I'm Ranma
 Saotome, sorry about this"


*END FOR NOW!!*
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