Subject: Re: [FFML] [AMG/Dreaming] Mortal Fates 2 BETA
From: "Chan Wei Lik" <weimin@pl.jaring.my>
Date: 7/3/1998, 5:58 AM
To: "'FFML'" <fanfic@fanfic.com>
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She was a ghost in her own home, and it frightened him.

Yes creepy....

Urd wondered if Belldandy would have made the decision had she known of its
consequences.

Probably.

"She'll... Bell will be okay.  She's stronger than you think."

Not if this psych warfare keeps up.

"Belldandy?  Belldandy, please, listen!"

Is Skuld had used her usual 'oneesama' it might have worked.

The classroom was empty, very empty.

Hmm... This can't be right. Keiichi wouldn't leave her.He'd carry her if he
had to.

The grin on Mara's lips increased.  "Well, you've fallen
halfway.  C'mon, Belldandy, let's go all the way."

This is quite a good scene.

After staring at the houses a moment more, she saw a light at a window

On which house?

Gods and Goddesses were born from men's dreams,

This would have some rather bad implications for Bell's situation.

>from that rationale that everything must have an logical explaination

I think all they wanted was an explaination. Logic be damned.

"I will see her."

One wonders if this is good or bad...

Surrounding her, in every mirror, were the infinite lives of Belldandy.

Surreal....

"Your name is Belldandy," her own voice interrupted, in a
soft yet detached tone, "and all you are is a mortal.  You
were a mortal, and you will die a mortal."<<

If that's the case, how can this be happening?

"I am Verthandi of the Norns."

Her predecessor and successor, no doubt.

I was hoping I'd have more to say, but seems like I don't. Till next time.