It sounds a bit childish, but read it to someone like a bed time story. If I have the time I'll read my fics over the phone to my best friend, you have no idea just how many mistakes you can catch. It also helps out on comma use as the pauses may/may not sound right.

JG
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Here sir we come to famous training ground of accursed springs
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|Guide of the training grounds|Ranma 1/2, Tenchi Muyo, BGC,  |
|of accursed springs, 8th     |AMG, Tank Police, Gall Force, |
|Disciple of Eriond, and proud|YUA, GitS, ADP, Evangelion    |
| member of the #SkAS#        |Project A-ko, UY, VPM, BGC!   |
|--------http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/6549 ----------------|
|Akane, Linna, Washu, Nene,   |Nene showed Mackie just how   |
|Skuld, Belldandy, Kiyone     |much she knew. Winter Blossoms|
---------------------------Jusenkyo---------------------------

>From "Kiwi Noriega" <krmn@hotmail.com>

I feel that I've memorized the whole darn thing.

That's my problem too.

I think I know what I've written.

The toughest thing about writing is knowing how to really read what is
written.  Anybody got any reading techniques?

	Henry J. Cobb	hcobb@slip.net          http://www.io.com/~hcobb
   Any sufficiently cool technology is indistinguishable from religion.

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