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'slightly rusted' doesn't work for me, "rusting" is
more active, and does not imply that the process has
stopped.
Very true, and when I read the sentence aloud with the "rusting" gerund
(I think it's a gerund, it's been so long since I've even *used* that
word... almost 8 years now?) instead of the way I phrased it, it flowed
much more smoothly.
Quoting from _The Deluxe Transitive Vampire_, by K. E. Gordon:
"The same '-ing' word ... may behave either as a gerund or as a
present participle, depending on how it is used. If you use it as a
noun, it is a gerund; if you use it as an adjective, it is a
participle."
In this case, then, the "rusting" of "rusting tines" would, in fact,
be a participle (a verb masquerading as an adjective).
--Freemage, who highly recommends _The Deluxe Transitve Vampire_ to
anyone who tended to fall asleep during high school English grammar
lessons.
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