A month or so ago this story was much discussed on the list after it was
posted to RAAC, it was help up as a good basic story, where the author made
all the neophyte mistakes of new character fics

New character comes in, 
Has awsome powers.
Solves everyones problems
Sweeps Nabiki off her feet.

The author has been doing a re-write, and not just a small one. The whole
texture and feel of the story has been changed,
If anyone read this and wished it had been a little different, I highly
recommend that you check out his new version on his home page.


Sorry for spamming, but this fic got a lot of play on the list, and I
thought it was only fair to let you know that the author has made a genuine
effort to respond to some of the remarks that were made about it.



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