Subject: Re: [FFML] [Ranma][Fanfic]
From: "Guy Under The Bridge ." <the_supergenius@hotmail.com>
Date: 8/11/1998, 1:41 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com



"May I Have This Dance?"
	by skeezy5


A clever beginning, but to anyone who can't stand to read about the 
Ranma/Akane wedding once again would probably chuck the fic before 
getting past the first three paragraphs.

Now, a Kasumi/Tofou wedding is a fresher idea--too bad the fic quickly 
reverts to the tired Ranma and Akane Express Their True Feelings With a 
Little Coaching From Their Friends premise. Aside from the little 
sideshow of Kasumi and Dr. Tofou, nothing interesting happens, and 
nothing new is discovered, just the same beaten path being trudged down 
once again.

In the final analysis, this is a well-written but bland fic.



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