Wesley Bridges wrote:

Ranma 1/2: What Was Never Meant To Be
by Wesley Bridges

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    Well, first of all, It's Nodoka, Not Nodaka.  Second of all, I enjoyed the
premise, it's an interesting and unique look on something I don't think anyone has
written about yet.  ^_^ Congrats!!!
    Oh, Third of all... I would suggest NOT writing in script format!! It's a
Nightmare, trust me! I botched my first Fanfic and trashed it because it was so long
and terribly written....
    Besides, I like the detailed, in depth descriptions of events, surroundings, and
character thought processes.  Just a suggestion from my own hazardous experiences
with script writing.
    Carry on with the story, I want to see where you go with it.

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Sincerely....
Shimitsu Kaoru.
Lost "Dragon-Boy"
of Shimitsu-Ryuu.
Prince of Chaos.
"What makes a curse is simply the view, a blessing to some is a curse unto you, But
acceptance can conquer that fear you hold high, through acceptance comes peace.....
are you willing to try?"
   -Quote from Kaoru Shimitsu.
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