Now let's see.  This is an interesting fanfic. I do have soome comments (not
bad ones, but some observations):

1) Mihoshi, her mother, and Misaki in the same room.  Do I detect a black hole
developing here?  (All of that empty space there.) ^_-

2) Tenchi getting married?  The mother of all fights to be held:
In the Red Corner: Ryoko, the ex-space pirate
In the Blue Corner: Ayeka, the princess of Jurai

(Oyuki, the princess of Neptune to handle the wagering. ^_^)

BTW, I do like the story so far.  Keep up the good work.

James Holzhauer (aka Tobimaro [Ton-chan])
       ---Kiyone getting married to Tenchi's dad. Now THAT was a surprise.
BTW, would Kiyone insist that Tenchi call her Mom? *chuckle* ^_-